As soon as I go to write an intro, it's like all these ideas blossom out of nowhere and I can't hurriedly pick any of them, or else they'll wilt without being appreciated first.
Naturally, I don't reveal my true self to someone until I fully trust them, and first impressions are just a facade of how you want to appear to someone, so I will not be writing about myself quite yet. Instead, I'd like to write something relatively poetic about my objective for this class.
Riptide=a potentially dangerous water current
Riptide=a potentially dangerous water current
This semester, my goal is to write a riptide.
Something that's going to suck you in, and pull you out to sea
Drown you in the infinity
Force you to think and contemplate and wonder
I want you to sink the surface
below
Embrace the water that fills your lungs and steals your breath away
Dragging you out into a sea of speculation
That's my One stipulation
There's my attempt at a poem, and I dunno how I'll accomplish this, but I know you will :)
now you've got me hooked. Can't wait to see what else you write!
ReplyDeleteyou're awesome
ReplyDeleteGreat Blog. Giving the Goal. Simplicity is Quality.
ReplyDeleteThe side bar need fixing but thats alright.
Can't wait to see the next post.
#Quality
"Something that's going to suck you in, and pull you out to sea
ReplyDeleteDrown you in the infinity
Force you to think and contemplate and wonder"
You have a talent with words. Love this post.
I love the way you wrote this. Excited for more.
ReplyDeletei dont know if the title of your blog is referring to this or not, but in the off-chance that it is; enough of your sonic adventure 3 fantasies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the title and the whole riptide concept
ReplyDeleteI love the feel and the look of your blog
ReplyDeleteLove the look of your blog and love the riptide concept
ReplyDeleteso good. so very good.
ReplyDelete"write a riptide."
ReplyDeleteThis is a t-shirt or a bumper sticker or a tattoo or something